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i was once naive.

once
at a point,
where i
believed
in fate.

i believed
in everything
my friends
would say.

i believed,
in you.

isnt it true,
that
eyelids
hold images?

that the little
tiny
tips
of each
strand
of hair,

hold the smell of you.

holds the touch
of your fingers
from that night?

isnt it true,
that it is impossible
for one heart
to forget one
incredible feeling?

to forget
a thousand nights
of warmth,
a thousand mornings
of softness
and contentment?

isnt it impossible,
to fall out
of love?

i always thought that
to be true.

but then again,
i also still ask myself

if planes

can crash

into stars.
©2005-2009 ~poetic-abortion
:iconpoetic-abortion:

Author's Comments

"when we were sitting under the pretties.
star pretties
you understand?"

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:iconairmega23:
Wow. Great poem!

--
To be positive at all times is to ignore all that is important sacred or valuable...
To be negative at all times is to be threatened by ridiculousness and instant discredibility...

-Kurt Cobain [1967-1994]
:iconmidnight-rooftop:
Woah... i read this a couple times and i still could not believe how you have made such an image with your words! WOW! i mean... GAH! this is great! ILOVEIT! :) instant favorite :) great work :claps::glomp:

--
Everyone is chasing something.
:iconattittude:
you are soo beautiful chel.. evrythin yu wryte is soo beautiful...

--
can yu kill me once again...???

member of:

~indians
~Emotional-Writings
=Self-Injury-Club
:iconfaded-tears:
Your poetry means so much. It always manages to match my feelings and make them feel not so bad anymore.
:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:
I love you.
:iconlife-uncommon:
i like it.
when did you write it?

i miss you a lot, right now.
im addicted to you
and each end of the strands on your head
smell
just
like
you.

that was creepy. sorry.

love.

--
this madness
this madness
quakes
with the earth
at dawn
and my words are already failing.
:iconpoetic-abortion:
a few nights ago.

haha.
i miss you too.

:heart:

--
"then he left,
ran from the entire world.
and never ever came back."
:iconpoetic-abortion:
thank you.

--
"then he left,
ran from the entire world.
and never ever came back."
:iconpoetic-abortion:
thank you
very
very
much.

--
"then he left,
ran from the entire world.
and never ever came back."
:iconpoetic-abortion:
thank you so so much.

--
"then he left,
ran from the entire world.
and never ever came back."

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